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I woke up today and submitted some art. I had over 200 watchers.I come back like 6/7 hrs later and is down to 70. WUTTTT??????No, I disagree! No, I disagree! No, I disagree! No, I disagree! No, I disagree! No, I disagree! No, I disagree! No, I disagree! Rage Rage Rage Rage Rage 
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Please use your imagination as I read this. This plot is one you must pay attention to. Thx and enjoy.

The year 2023....
The sun shines brighter than it did on Earth. Space was a quiet vaccum. At least Keita thought as he led his squad of fighter ships into position. The quiet of dead space was soon overcome with the discordant sounds of laser beam fire from enemy starships. "Phoenix Squadron, split up into to groups of 2. We'll get 'em by surprise with this one. He then was followed by his old partner and best friend, Shinji Harada-Chan. He was more of a ground warrior than in the air. But he still performed many combative techniques that left both sides in awe. "That'll teach them to mess with us, right pal?" Shinji asked. "Yeah, sure hotshot. But we need to get to the conduit and destroy it." implied Keita. "The whozawhazitduit?" Said a confused Shinji. "sigh*,See those glowing blue things at the center of the ship guarded by a ray shield?" said Keita, "Hit them with your ion torpedoes!" "Phoenix 3 and 4, get your Butts over here and give me some cover fire!" ,ordered Shinji. "Yessir!" ,Said Phoenix 3.  They all at once fired up the jets and took off at lightspeed. Shinji joked and said,"Nothing a little torpedo can't fix!" Phoenix 4 was also Commander Hitsugueya, who was Shinji's second in command. He jokingly said," But one torpedo can't stop a war, I'm afraid sir." "Always killing the mood Hitsy!" Said Shinji. "Get ready to fire on my mark!" Said Keita.
" Steady......steady......NOW!!!" The shots were fired. They echoed through the fabric of space. It was said that it was a shot heard from all six planets. The torpedoes destroyed the conduit and Phoenix Squadron celebrated. Their celebration was ended when all the militia forces were shot down by Zorgox destroyers. They were exotic looking ships, almost looking organic and alive. They're cannons were so powerful, that one blast created a giant shockwave of power. It was an EMP that shut down all Insurgency systems and they all crashed over the Planet Rimba. Waking up with a cough because of the sand in his throat, Shinji awakened, along with his injured friend,Keita. All but Commander Hitsugueya were dead. Keita nursed over him while Shinji noticed dark, shadowy figures in the distance. He pulled out his sword and suddenly a black, silvery glow was about him. He had a hidden rage no one knew he had. He took the sword and thrust it behind his back. He then let out a raw amount of power from a single slash of the blade. The wave sent back the figures, known as the Glox, flying through the air, body parts flying. Keita noticed some on his side also. He flipped towards them and pulled out his bow staff. He engineered them with electric charges at the tip of each end of it. He let out a barrage of strikes, unseen through the naked eye, and hit them where it hurt. But suddenly, the injured Hitsugueya heard and saw something in the distance. It came from the ship and flew right toward them.  It was a flash of red. It was their leader and other best friend, Kestrel Zytamuga. As he rushed to help his friends, many Glox were eviscerated. He stood there, a war path behind him, with his blade flaming with a red aura just as he was. He then raised up his wrist to his mouth and used his comlink and ordered" Kokoro, send in fighters and medical ships. The battle we need to win is here. Now is the time." "On their way right now, Kes!"Kokoro responded. Suddenly, thousands of fighters and medical frigates landed on the planet. A person was dropped from one of the ships and crash landed. "So guys, together again at last, huh?" said Kokoro. " We'll show 'em how earthlings do things!" said Shinji.  The Insurgent soldiers started firing against the Glox army and the final fight for the universe began.....

Kokoro (Cyborg Form) by JaytheForceSensitive







HOPE U GUYS LIKED IT! BE SURE TO LOOK OUT FOR MY FURTHER CHAPTERS! CHAPTER 2 WILL BE RELEASED ON SUNDAY! God bless! Til we meet again!
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